Hey gang!
So Beef told me that

's very own Mystery Machine Team the Gum Shoes for Hire, were taking crap about my boys over at Ultimate Strike Down, so well I figured there is only one way to settle this! It's Battle time!!! Hahaha
I'm so pumped for the release of the Gum Shoes book I had to do something with them in it! I hope you like what I decided on! I think it kinda looks a bit plain, but I couldn't figure out what else to do. Any suggestions?
Beef colors by:

Rest of work: Me
Gum Shoes for Hire Copyright: Sean"Cheeks"Galloway
Anyway i hope y'all likes! Please let me know what you think!
Also I hear them Pancratia folks were saying something too!
-Josh
The layout works as it does read as a character select screen from a game, so it is conveying the appropriate message. I think what could make it better is if the characters weren't floating in mid-air. I feel that this image would have a lot more volume if the characters had a surface to stand on and were casting shadows. To give it a sleek look the surface could have the character reflection subtly worked into. I think with this and making the background a little more faded it would make the image more three dimensional, and have it pop a little more.
Other then that I think this look really cool. It's a fun mix of ideas that conveys it's message clearly.
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